A nice review of my book by New Zealand book girl (Chrissi Blair) on her blog.
I've had a great time this morning trawling through the reviews on her site (I'm supposed to be working, but it's Valentine's Day). Lots of in-depth information there on kids' and young adults' books. My reading list has grown!
Here's the link... Thanks Ms Blair.
Ms Blair recommends: The Bold Ship Phenomenal by Sarah Johnson [Junior ...: The Bold Ship Phenomenal By Sarah Johnson Illustrations by Deborah Hinde Flat Bed Press, 2015 ISBN 9780473313142
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Tuesday, 8 December 2015
Enjoy a good scare? Author Sue Copsey tells us about her latest spooky story for kids...
I have just finished reading Sue Copsey's fabulous ghost story for kids - The Ghosts of Tarawera (Treehouse Books, 2015).
The Ghosts of Tarawera is book two in a planned series of New Zealand-based ghost stories for junior fiction and young adult readers (the first was The Ghost of Young Nick's Head (Pear Jam books, 2011)).
It's a wonderful, wonderful story, and a gripping read, which builds on and adds to the well-known ghostly appearances that preceded the Mount Tarawera eruption of 1886.
I've written a review of the book, which you can read on Goodreads (along with numerous four and five star reviews by other appreciative readers).
Sue kindly agreed to answer some questions about how she came to write the book, and what she has planned next - here's what she said. For more information, check out her website: www.suecopsey.com
The Ghosts of Tarawera is book two in a planned series of New Zealand-based ghost stories for junior fiction and young adult readers (the first was The Ghost of Young Nick's Head (Pear Jam books, 2011)).
It's a wonderful, wonderful story, and a gripping read, which builds on and adds to the well-known ghostly appearances that preceded the Mount Tarawera eruption of 1886.
I've written a review of the book, which you can read on Goodreads (along with numerous four and five star reviews by other appreciative readers).
Sue kindly agreed to answer some questions about how she came to write the book, and what she has planned next - here's what she said. For more information, check out her website: www.suecopsey.com
Interview with Sue
The Ghosts of Tarawera draws on the famous New Zealand
legend about the ghostly waka that appeared before the Mount Tarawera eruption.
What was it that drew you to this story?
I well remember the first time I
read about this legend. I was editing a school textbook about the Taupo
Volcanic Zone, and in amongst all this serious science there it was, as
reported at the time (1886) by many tourists as well as local Maori. I was
drawn to the story because there were so many witnesses: two groups of Europeans in sightseeing boats,
as well as villagers on the lake shore. The sightseers reported seeing an
impressive war canoe – nothing spooky about it – but the Maori realised it was
supernatural as there hadn’t been a waka of that type in the area in living
memory. Local Maori also recognised it as an omen of disaster, and 11 days
later were proved right when Mt Tarawera erupted. I reckon Lake Tarawera’s
phantom waka, which legend says will reappear if the mountain reawakens, is far
more credible than the Loch Ness monster, and look which is more famous. That’s
just wrong!
Your story is very evocative of the landscapes around Lake
Rotomahana and Rotorua. Did you spend much time there while you were writing
the book?
I’ve been to this part of the North
Island many times, so I had a good feel for it. I love the mix of forest,
lakes, hills, Maori culture and weird and wonderful volcanic features. You can
feel you’ve slipped back in time, to when dinosaurs roamed the Earth.
But also, Google Earth was my
friend. While I was writing the book I had it almost permanently open as I
zoomed in and out of satellite images looking for how the children would get
across and around Lake Rotomahana before and during the eruption. When I’d
finished, I hauled the family down to a bach near Mt Tarawera, and revisited
the Buried Village, went on a boat trip on Lake Rotomahana, and kayaked on Lake
Tarawera, making sure it all felt right, especially the atmosphere – I wanted
the reader to feel they were really there, and recognise it if they visited.
What was the hardest part of the story to write, and why?
Writing the story was easy, it more
or less wrote itself! But I was worried about getting the science right. I love
popular science but wasn’t very good at it at school. Show me a physics
equation and I feel a bit faint. I wanted to include lots of interesting facts
about volcanoes and Mt Tarawera (I call it ‘education by stealth’), and to be absolutely
sure I got it right, I asked GNS Science, who monitor NZ’s volcanoes and
earthquakes, to check the manuscript for me. And so began the best correspondence
I’ve ever had with an expert. Cornel de Ronde, who led the team that explored
the lake floor at Rotomahana, contacted me, saying he loved how I was weaving
all this geology into my adventure story, as he’s passionate about science
education in schools. He was quite accepting of a few, ahem, liberties I took
with the geology of the area in order to keep Joe, Eddie, Anastasia and Beckie
alive. ‘They’d certainly die in an eruption such as you describe,’ he said.
‘But this is a moot point – it is a story, after all.’
What spooky tales did you enjoy as a child?
I liked the ‘true’ ones. Every
village in Britain, where I grew up, had its spooks, and I had a book that
listed just about every haunted house in the country. Thinking back, I must
have been a weird child to have on holiday. Wherever we travelled in England,
my twin loves of Enid Blyton’s Famous Five, and local folklore meant that I was
always searching for secret passages and ghosts.
Have you ever seen a ghost?
Honestly, I don’t know – but something
odd happened that makes me strongly suspect I have. It was my wedding night
(seriously – no chortling please) and Michael and I were staying in a turret
room in a Victorian hotel near my home town of Rugby. I was in bed and Michael
was in the bathroom. In one wall was a small door which, without warning, flew
open. A figure was silhouetted in the doorway, bright light behind. Then it
slammed shut again. A bit like those sightseers with the phantom waka, I didn’t
think this was anything supernatural, I just assumed someone had got lost in
the hotel’s maze of corridors and ended up at our room by mistake. When Michael
reappeared, I told him what had happened and asked him to move a table in front
of the door. He did so, looking at me oddly – he thought I’d probably been half
asleep (and yes, a few glasses of champagne had been imbibed).
Next morning we opened this little
door to see a fire escape leading out onto the turret roof. So how could anyone
have been out there, and why had there been a bright light behind them? Could
this have been something spooky?
Feeling a bit silly, I asked the
receptionist if the hotel had any ghostly residents, only to learn that there
were several (most usually a coach and horses, a headless man, and a hand), and
that people were constantly reporting strange occurences. Seems the hotel was,
and still is, notorious for its ghosts – and we had no idea before that night.
This is your second novel about New Zealand ghosts. Is there
another one on the horizon? And if so, can you give us a hint about the ghosts
involved?
Yes indeed! Peeping over the
horizon is The Ghosts of Moonlight Creek.
I wanted to set my next ghost story in one of New Zealand’s old goldmining
settlements, and discovered the wonderfully named Moonlight, near Queenstown.
Anastasia’s movie director father is filming a fantasy movie down there and
invites Joe, Eddie, Beckie and Anastasia to the movie set as a treat after
their scare at Mt Tarawera. However, they soon discover filming is being held
up by unexplained incidents, and the crew are beginning to call it a cursed
film. I’m about a quarter of the way through and can’t wait to find out what
happens!
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Thursday, 22 October 2015
Wooden Arms houses
Everywhere I go, I see Wooden Arms houses. Homes and
buildings that have been used, inhabited, perhaps cherished, and now have been
left behind.
I’m also becoming increasingly aware that they are passing.
Ghosts of buildings, a feature of any road trip landscape, but fading, literally,
before our eyes. Wood. Tin. The rain will disperse them all.
These ones I snapped at Mangaweka recently. If you had the
inclination you could buy four shops for a bargain price. I wish I had cause to
uproot my family to Mangaweka. Think of the stories you would inherent. The
ghosts that would creep from the corners at night, each with their history to
tell. Priceless! Tuesday, 22 September 2015
Room 8 is GREAT!
Look at this wonderful blog post by the kids in Room 8 at Pukete School. Thanks guys, I had such a nice time...
Room 8 is GREAT!: Author Visit! As a part of our Inquiry into books, ...: Author Visit! As a part of our Inquiry into books, we had a visit from a New Zealand author Sarah Johnson. We read her story Wooden Arm...
Room 8 is GREAT!: Author Visit! As a part of our Inquiry into books, ...: Author Visit! As a part of our Inquiry into books, we had a visit from a New Zealand author Sarah Johnson. We read her story Wooden Arm...
Here's the picture collage they sent me afterwards. So cool!
Wednesday, 26 August 2015
Tui Allen has loaded this review about my book on Goodreads.
Tui is an author in her own right, and our local New Zealand Society of Authors delegate, so it means
a lot to me that she liked it so much. Thanks Tui.
Rollicking but Meaningful Kiwi Novel for Kids
This is a rollicking good yarn on one level but so much more than that. It has something important to say to its audience, beyond the adventure itself.
I found it un-put-down-able and read until almost midnight to finish. I'm an adult, so not even part of the target audience.
The beginning was irresistibly captivating. The romance of a ship in a bottle especially one found as flotsam (or was it jetsam perhaps? Had some power SENT that bottle to Malachi?) I was encouraged to wonder about that by the author's intriguing decision to simply reverse the usual order of those two words. Jetsam and flotsam.
The story is about Malachi and his dad who are grieving the loss of Malachi's mother. Neither are functioning to their full capacity and neither were over it yet, but Malachi reaches out for adventure and new beginnings with the help and guidance of the action that takes place among the crew of the pirate ship playing out their own story inside the bottle.
It's a story with a message of conservation. Malachi's own voyage as a stowaway on a land-based "pirate ship" takes him into a world where the prisoners he rescues are precious NZ wildlife doomed otherwise to be stolen and sold.
The story ends with powerful glimmers of hope for the future for Malachi and his dad. I love a story that shows growth in the characters as this one does. With its strong links to the sea, and its theme of the wildlife of New Zealand this is a true Kiwi story. Where else in the world do kids get to wander along an empty ocean beach on their way to school in the morning?
The book is a beautiful product. Very child-proof. I tested it. The cover design is fresh and inspiring and there is an added bonus of charming greyscale chapter-head motif drawings.
All NZ school libraries should buy multiple copies at once and it should sell internationally to give the world a glimpse of NZ.
Wednesday, 24 June 2015
Conversations in self-publishing for the serially challenged 5: crunching the numbers
The Bold Ship
Phenomenal is safely out of my hands – in China being printed – so I thought
I would look at the thorny question of costs.
When I decided to publish the story myself, one of my publishing
‘values’, as it were, was that the book had to be a top-class production. This
was important to me, not only because I trained in publishing, but because this
was my product: I had to stand by it for as long as it endured in the world,
and I wanted to be proud of it.I’ve done my best, and with the help of all the talented professionals who’ve played their part in getting the book to this stage, I think we’ve got a great result. But of course all this help costs, and what became clear very early on (in fact, before I even started, when I did my first rough budget) is that I was unlikely to ever make any money on it. Luckily that was never one of my aims.
I’ve listed the costs I’ve incurred below, so that anyone
setting out on this route can see the type of expenses involved, and where they
might be able to save on costs by finding a cheaper option or doing it
themselves (something I haven’t been very good at).
The figures given are rough – both to protect my suppliers’
modesty, and to reflect the range of prices I was quoted for particular tasks
(which on occasion, varied widely).
This list is not the end of the expenses, there is still
warehousing, and promotion, and GST and other taxes, and bad debtors (assuming
I make any sales) to contend with. But these are the bulk of the up-front costs,
and I hope you’ll find them useful. Figures exclude GST.
·
Editing – $600
·
Proofreading – $250
·
Illustration – $1200
·
Design – $2000
·
Printing – $4000
·
Freight – $500 (very roughly, as this part of
the process is still to come)
→Total so far = $9400, which for
1500 books, means that $6.26 per book is production costs.
For a $20 book, where the bookseller takes 40% ($8), and the
distributor 25% ($5), and the GST accounts for 15% ($3), you can see the quandary.
Except that it’s not a quandary, if you want to see your
book in print. And looking purely at the dollar side of things overlooks the non-monetary
gains, one of which has undoubtedly been the enormous help and support I have
received from all the book professionals involved: worth every cent!
Friday, 5 June 2015
It’s a first – twice
I’ve had two pleasant surprises and two firsts in one week.
Thanks
Sue, although I hope there wasn’t too much crying going on (it’s not meant to
be sad – well just a smidgen).
First (of the firsts) is this online listing for The Bold Ship Phenomenal on Nationwide Book Distributors website.
They’re distributing the book for me, and they’re taking trade
pre-orders now.
The second first is The
Bold Ship Phenomenal’s first review. This is what Sue Copsey says about it
on her blog.
“…The
Bold Ship Phenomenal,
due out later this year, made me cry as I edited it. It’s not a sad book though
– the make-you-cry bit is just a small part. The rest is a page-turning
adventure with a ship in a bottle as its star, and a strong nature theme. It’s
classically New Zealand, but everyone, everywhere will love it. Take my word
for it!”
So
what with two surprises and confirmation that printing is underway in China,
it’s been a pretty exciting week all round. The
Bold Ship Phenomenal, as a book, rather than a story, is beginning to feel
real.
Friday, 15 May 2015
I need a new book-home, writing studio, bum
The really exciting
thing about this photo is not my book (unfortunately), but where it’s taken.
The book (lucky thing) is now living in the writing studio
of my wonderful writing colleague Dawn McMillan,
where it is among very esteemed company (I hope it is behaving).
Dawn’s own (numerous) books are consistent best-sellers. In
fact, I Need a New Bum (Libro International,
2012), rarely drops off the New Zealand bestseller list, and if it does, it
soon bounces its way back up.

Why Do Dogs Sniff Bottoms (Penguin NZ, 2008) is also often there, and her recent picture book, Doctor Grundy’s Undies (Libro International, 2014) (about a pair of flash flying undies) is currently sitting on Whitcoulls Top 10 Books for Children list.
Notice in the picture, there's another of Dawn's books there too!
But Dawn doesn’t only write about bottom-related topics. Colour the Stars (Scholastic NZ, 2012) is about a boy describing to his blind friend what colours smell, feel, taste and sound like. What a fabulous idea! And just one of many when it comes to Dawn’s books

But what I am really jealous of (going back to my book and
the company it now keeps) is Dawn’s writing studio.
I suffer from shed-envy in general. I really, really love
sheds, especially older rustic ones, and when I spot a promising shed, I love
to imagine what I would do in it, if it were mine. There is something special
about sheds – their self-containment, and sense of promise that they will, in
turn, contain the user, freeing the person to create, build or dream, or any of
the other things that people like to do in sheds.
But Dawn’s studio (which after all is just a posh shed) is
truly one to be coveted. I have only seen it in this picture, but apparently,
in addition to being gorgeous, it looks out over the beach.
To me it looks like writing heaven. No wonder Dawn’s books are so good. If you don’t yet know them, or do but want to find out more about Dawn’s shed and what happens there check out her website or blog.
They’re both as full of life as Dawn is, and she also runs a
monthly competition to win one of her books.
Here she is with some of her fans from Te Puru school, doing what all good children's writers do best - reading a book.
Sunday, 19 April 2015
Conversations about self-publishing for the serially challenged 4: dotting your i’s
Looking at the title I chose for this series of blogs, I’m
beginning to feel rather less serially challenged than when I began. I realise
I’ve learnt a huge amount, along the way. That can only be a good thing if self-,
or indie-, or hybrid-publishing is to become more the norm for New Zealand
authors. I now have a much better idea of what is involved, and to be honest,
it’s very exciting.
In past posts I have talked about it surprised me how
creative the editing side of things is. Now as I move more into the actual
publishing process what surprises me is how much fun it is. I’m having a blast.
I guess that’s not surprising, given I love books (of course I’d enjoy making
one of my own), but still it is not what I expected. Lots of work – yes – but very
enjoyable too.A friend who is herself considering self-publishing asked me recently what exactly I have been doing. I sent her the email below, in the hope it would help her process when she reached that stage. I hope it helps yours too.
What you'll need to do:
1.
Finish writing your book.
2.
Get it professionally edited – this step is kind-of
optional, if you’re also an editor, but not really if you want a good product. It’s
extremely hard to objectively edit your own work.
3.
Get it proofread – also only kind-of optional. The
last thing you want is errors.
4.
Find and brief a book designer – there are
plenty. Find one whose covers and internal designs you like, and who produces
the type of books (in terms of format) that you’re after.
5.
Find and brief an illustrator – if you are
using one. I have been lucky to have a friend whose work I know is wonderful.
She’s doing my cover and internal illustrations. Otherwise, you may need to
find a cover image you want to use (unless your designer does this for you).
6.
Decide on a publishing name and logo (if you are
using one). Also, whether or not you are going to form a company. My accountant
has advised the latter may be a good idea if I plan to publish more books,
especially by other authors. Something to think about for the future.
7.
Get an ISBN number, or several if you’re
printing in different formats; from the National Library website. A very
straightforward process, but you may need to query them if they tell you (as
they did me) that you can’t have it until four weeks before the book is
printed. Obviously this doesn’t work if you are printing overseas.
8.
Get a barcode – you can do this online. It’s
based on your ISBN and costs around $30. I used Barcodes Limited (www.barcodes.co.nz).
9.
Get quotes from a printer – I got a few, but you
could get lots of quotes. There’s a big difference between them. I think I’m
going to get the book printed in China, but actually some of the New Zealand quotes
I got were getting close, in terms of costs.
10.
Organise a freight agent – if you’re printing
overseas, this seems to be cheaper than letting the printers organise the
freight, and there should be no hidden costs (fingers crossed). They should
itemise all the subsidiary costs you’ll encounter when importing books.
11.
Find a distributor – there are several, but I
have found them hard to raise a response from. I am unsure if this is because
they are swamped with submissions from self-published authors or, conversely,
are not yet used to dealing with them. You may have more luck if you have the
designed product to show them. If you do get a response, they will send you
their terms of trade, including how much commission they take and where they
will try to place your book.
12.
Pay everyone, including the GST on the imported
books. Kat says she got stung for this.
13.
Move onto the next big step: receiving, promoting
and selling your book.
Whew! No wonder I’ve felt busy. But like I said, all good
fun.
Tuesday, 3 February 2015
The professional edit: Conversations about self-publishing for the serially challenged 3
I am two-thirds of the way through having the manuscript for
my hopefully soon to be self-published book, The Bold Ship Phenomenal, edited, and what continues to amaze me is
the extent of the changes that I, and now the editor, am making even at this
late stage.
I work, in my day job, as a professional writer, so rewriting and rehashing and reimagining are no stranger to me. I actually enjoy them, and have no doubts that they strengthen a piece of writing.
It is the nature and size of these late changes that surprises. The Bold Ship Phenomenal has been through more structural and fine edits than I care to remember. It has been – rewritten, rehashed and reimagined. Yet I find I am revising whole scenes, adding new ones, strengthening connections, embellishing and excising details.
The process feels like tightening a belt, or a net, around the essence of the story, until its clarity is secured.
I guess what I had not appreciated is how creative the external editing process would be, and in this respect, I feel I have struck it lucky with the editor I have chosen, Sue Copsey.
This no credit to me (all credit to Sue). Sue was a senior editor at Dorling Kindersley in London, before coming to New Zealand and freelancing for several publishing houses here. She is an established children’s writer in her own right.
There were no shortage of good options when I was looking for an external editor (one positive side of the current publishing crunch is that there are lots of talented publishing professionals now offering their skills on a freelance basis). But it was important to me that I found someone with experience working with children’s books. Children’s writing is different. It is magic and inspiration and wonder. Done well, it is transportation and transformation. An editor needs to get that. I feel confident that Sue does.
I’m also very grateful that she’s responded positively to my manuscript (thanks Sue). In the absence of a traditional publisher acting as gatekeeper, it can be hard to remain 100 per cent positive about the calibre of your work. Yet, paradoxically, it becomes even more important to maintain that calibre when you self-publish. This is your work, and there is only you to stand by it, so quality – of story, of process, of the finished product – becomes all.

I’ve found it helps to have supportive writer friends (‘Of
course you must do it’), and I’ve also found encouragement to go ahead from an
unlooked-for quarter – nature.
I love to walk (like lots of writer I find it a vital part
of the creative process) and on recent walks I have increasingly stumbled upon signs
from nature that support my decision to publish my story myself. Now I don’t mean to sound like a fruitcake. I don’t mean that little birds have flown down and tweeted in my ear (or that whales have smiled at me or miniature pirates waved me on). What I have noticed is things in my environment, the west coast New Zealand environment, that have said to me – yes, this is what we are like, this is worth telling, this is wondrous and amazing, uniquely our own, there is a story in this: give it your best shot Sarah, it is worth writing about.
Tuesday, 23 December 2014
Wooden Arms goes international
Check out this picture of Wooden Arms being read to a
class at the Anglo American
International School in Moscow.
OK, so it helps that the
reader (Nick) is the husband of one of my oldest friends. As a New
Zealand children's writer, it's a good idea to have friends (or relatives)
with kids in exotic places.
I wondered what the
audience would make of the New Zealand context, but apparently they loved
it. I guess the theme of places we have loved and left is a universal one,
especially for these international students, and in a city with such
glorious buildings as Moscow.
There's a podcast of Wooden Arms being read by Matu Ngaropo on Radio New Zealand's website: you can listen to or download it here. The recording is part of the Storytime Treasure Chest.
There's a podcast of Wooden Arms being read by Matu Ngaropo on Radio New Zealand's website: you can listen to or download it here. The recording is part of the Storytime Treasure Chest.
Friday, 29 August 2014
The structural edit: Conversations about self-publishing for the serially challenged 2
Phew! That was a mission.
I smile to see that, when I decided that the first thing I needed to do to get my manuscript – the Bold Ship Phenomenal – ready for publication was give it a structural edit, I allowed myself two weeks to complete the task.
How long has it taken me? Three months.
This is not the first structural edit mind you. In fact, it is probably closer to the twentieth. Yet when I decided to self-publish, it still seemed essential that I do yet another. The reason, I have realised, is the greater burden – to act as both creator and gatekeeper – that rests on the self-published author.
In a traditional publishing model, you (the author) create something and the publisher says ‘yeah’ or ‘nay’. They are the gatekeeper; the arbiter of quality, freshness, appeal, and of being ‘good enough’. As self-publisher you must fulfil this role yourself. It is your work after all and you must stand by it (hopefully with pride) once it takes its place in the world.
Yet, it is a curious concept this ‘good enough’. One of the pitfalls of the traditional model is that good enough can lead to a lack of ambition and sameness in what is being publishing. Conversely, one of the wonders of the new indie publishing scene is the freedom it affords authors to produce and make publically available new and strangely beautiful and unsettling works.
Yet as any good editor will tell you, it is difficult (some would say impossible) for a writer to gain sufficient distance from their work to see what needs to be done to bring it onto its finest form.
Hence the delay. Rather than being a straightforward matter of shifting bits around, my structural edit has been an angst process of asking ‘Is this right?’, ‘Could this be better?’, ‘Will this appeal to readers in the way I intend, or is the appeal limited to me?’. In short: ‘Is this good enough?’

“Amateurs are not afraid to make mistakes or look ridiculous in public. They’re in love, so they don’t hesitate to do work that others think of as silly or just plain stupid,” he says (Workman Publishing, New York, p.15).
So it is with The Bold Ship Phenomenal. I do love this story. It carries part of me in it. So I must act like an amateur and be willing to put it out there and potentially look ridiculous in public, while at the same time doing everything in my power to make it ‘good enough’. I owe it – I feel – to the story and to the readers who will (again hopefully) one day share it.
I smile to see that, when I decided that the first thing I needed to do to get my manuscript – the Bold Ship Phenomenal – ready for publication was give it a structural edit, I allowed myself two weeks to complete the task.
How long has it taken me? Three months.
This is not the first structural edit mind you. In fact, it is probably closer to the twentieth. Yet when I decided to self-publish, it still seemed essential that I do yet another. The reason, I have realised, is the greater burden – to act as both creator and gatekeeper – that rests on the self-published author.
In a traditional publishing model, you (the author) create something and the publisher says ‘yeah’ or ‘nay’. They are the gatekeeper; the arbiter of quality, freshness, appeal, and of being ‘good enough’. As self-publisher you must fulfil this role yourself. It is your work after all and you must stand by it (hopefully with pride) once it takes its place in the world.
Yet, it is a curious concept this ‘good enough’. One of the pitfalls of the traditional model is that good enough can lead to a lack of ambition and sameness in what is being publishing. Conversely, one of the wonders of the new indie publishing scene is the freedom it affords authors to produce and make publically available new and strangely beautiful and unsettling works.
Yet as any good editor will tell you, it is difficult (some would say impossible) for a writer to gain sufficient distance from their work to see what needs to be done to bring it onto its finest form.
Hence the delay. Rather than being a straightforward matter of shifting bits around, my structural edit has been an angst process of asking ‘Is this right?’, ‘Could this be better?’, ‘Will this appeal to readers in the way I intend, or is the appeal limited to me?’. In short: ‘Is this good enough?’

I have been cheered in this process by Austin Kleon,
whose small books (Steal Like an Artist
and Show Your Work) I stumbled upon
mid-way through. Austin takes a pragmatic and enabling approach to the creative
process, urging people to trust in the value of their creativity and put its
products out there. (You can listen to his manifesto on stealing like an artist here.)
Of particular value was his insight (in Show Your Work) that “you don’t have to be a genius”. Everyone, he argues, has something to
contribute, and it is OK to “be an amateur”.“Amateurs are not afraid to make mistakes or look ridiculous in public. They’re in love, so they don’t hesitate to do work that others think of as silly or just plain stupid,” he says (Workman Publishing, New York, p.15).
So it is with The Bold Ship Phenomenal. I do love this story. It carries part of me in it. So I must act like an amateur and be willing to put it out there and potentially look ridiculous in public, while at the same time doing everything in my power to make it ‘good enough’. I owe it – I feel – to the story and to the readers who will (again hopefully) one day share it.
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Friday, 20 June 2014
An interview with the super-author and super-illustrator of Super Saffron, Victoria M. Azaro
One of the good bits about being a writer is all the
talented creative book people that you get to meet. Writers, illustrator, book
designers and producers: New Zealand has lots of them, even though we’re only
small.
Victoria M. Azaro is one of
these, and I consider her super-talented even by talented people’s standards.
And the good news is she’s just produced a new book.Super Saffron hit the shelves a couple of months ago and is a compilation of Victoria’s previous three Saffron books – Saffron (Mallinson Rendell, 2009), Saffron: I have everything under control (Mallinson Rendell, 2010), Saffron: So quite excellent (Penguin, 2012) – but with loads of added extras.
For those of you who don’t yet know Saffron, she’s phenomenal. She’s spunky, funny and ‘so quite excellent’ at getting herself, and little sisters Sage and Star Anise, into tricky situations (while Dad talks on his cell phone, and Mum practises yoga poses and dispenses calming essential oils).
Victoria is from Argentina, and worked as an international fashion designer and artist before she turned to writing and illustrating books, about 10 years ago. As a result, her stories are crammed full of overseas adventures, and gorgeous illustrations (with lots of fabulous frocks).
Victoria says, “I would like to think that my writing is FUN, and that it exposes children in New Zealand to a wide range of cultures and ways of thinking.”
I can vouch for the fact that her writing has fun, as all three of my older boys have loved the original Saffron books, and we have reread them many times as bedtime favourites. So we’re all super-pleased that Super Saffron is now out (complete with 22 extra pages of fun activities), and that Victoria is working on a series about Saffron’s little sister Sage, to be launched later this year.
Victoria kindly agreed to answer some questions about her writing; her answers are below. But if you’d like to find out more about her work, what Saffron’s been up to lately, or how to buy her books, go to: www.victoriamazaro.com and www.saffron-sage.com.
Victoria’s websites are as gorgeous as her books: one look and you’ll be hooked.
Me: When did you
start making books and why?
Victoria:
I started writing and illustrating (both at the same time) 10 years ago when my
first son was one. It took me by surprise because I found it exciting, fun and a
break from the adult world. It wasn't until my second son was born, three years
later, that I decided to quit my job as an Art Lecturer and concentrate my time
in a serious career in the publishing world.Me: How would you describe your work?
Victoria: I would like to think that it is FUN and exposes children in New Zealand to a wide range of cultures and ways of thinking. My favourite part is character development and that includes searching for my character's voice and also drawing it, I love the drawing part!
Me: Tell us about Super Saffron: how did the book come about?
Victoria: Super Saffron is a compilation of the three books in the Saffron series, but it also has an extra 20 pages of new materials. After my many visits to schools and bookshops I wanted to add some non-fiction aspect to the stories and I was able to do this in Super Saffron. This includes maps, a Spanish glossary, book club notes, a cake recipe from Mexico and some general knowledge games that focus on food, dress and customs.
Victoria: Sage – Saffron's little sister – will have her own book, which will be released in September or October this year. It’s aimed at 6 to 8 year olds.
Victoria: Super Saffron was launched in April 2014 and is available in all bookshops and online stores. For more info about my books or me, please visit my sites: www.victoriamazaro.com or www.saffron-sage.com. I’ll also be the June Star Author for Christchurch Libraries, so I will be blogging every week there.
Thank
you Victoria (and Saffron and Sage) – we think you’re super!
Friday, 13 June 2014
Thank you Puketaha for the cheese
A big thank you to all the wonderful kids at Puketaha School who made my author visit such fun this week. I really enjoyed our time together, talking about the ins and outs of writing and book production.And a specially big thank you to the clever young man who said, "A story is like cheese: the longer you leave it the sharper the flavour".
Isn't that fabulous! A reminder that all work benefits from being given time to rest and mature.
Tuesday, 3 June 2014
Hip Hop down to the granny beat
Talented Judi Billcliff is launching her second book of 'fun poems for kids young and old' his coming Sunday 8 June at 1pm at St Columba's School in Frankton, Hamilton.
Judi's poems are a treat for poetry lovers everywhere. Fun, funky and off the wall: if you're lucky enough to see them performed by Judi (which I assume we will this weekend), they're pocket-sized drama treats.
Judi is a drama teacher by trade and was a runner up in the 2013 National Poetry Competition. Granny Goes to Hip Hop is her second book, and like Judi herself, promises to be full of high-energy entertainment.I interviewed Judi recently as part of the Between the Lines exhibition (she was one of the exhibitors). You can read the full interview to find out more about her inspirations and work, or visit the Rainbow Poetry website (and Judi's blog) for more about the launch and what else she's up to. See you there.
Friday, 30 May 2014
Conversations about self-publishing for the serially challenged
It was a good week last week. I sent off two stories to
publishers (with fingers tied in double-bows, sheep’s shanks and half-hitches)
and am now in that lovely hiatus that opens up between sending a manuscript,
and finding out it is not wanted.
When I started writing this was a period of breathless hope
and anticipation for the post. Now
(having received my fair share of rejections), it is more a time of quiet
pleasure: at having finished a project (an achievement in itself), and for celebrating
the beginning of a story’s journey into the world, which is in fact what the
initial submission is.
It’s also a time of excitement, because I get to start
something new. While I always have a stew of ideas and story scraps milling
around my writing desk, I find I have to focus on one story at a time if I am
to get them out the door (and who wants a finished story hanging around? It’s
like being hounded by a dog that wants a walk). So when one’s gone, I get to
start the next. Wonderful!
Next up for me is The
Bold Ship Phenomenal, a story that has been making circuitous journeys off
my desk and onto the desks of publishers and back again for some years now, yet
refuses to either find a home or lie down and die. It was shortlisted for the
Kobo/NZ Society of Authors e-publishing prize last year, but didn’t win, so
back, once again, it came.
Now I have decided to self-publish it (it is winking encouragingly
up at me as I write). Being rather late off (or on) the bandwagon for most
things, I have never self-published anything before, and other than a vague
idea, am not even particularly sure how to do it.
So for the next few months, I’m going to record this
particular journey in my blog, in the hope that what I find out may help, or at
least amuse, some of you. It’s self-publishing for the serially challenged
because it’s for people like me whose natural environment to date has been
paper, who have large families (or even small ones) to care for, who work, who love
to get out into the world and wonder and play (and frequently do), and who on
top of that write…and now publish.
Looking at that list, all I can say is thank goodness for
publishers who sometimes say yes. But thank goodness also for having options. I
can’t wait to get started. I’ll let you know how I get on.
And the picture? It's gorgeous Ngarunui beach in Whaingaroa Raglan where I live, but it's also where my little ship begins its journey. Not this beach, in particular, but any beach where the waves roll onto the sand, then retreat like beckoning fingers, leaving behind treasures for sharp-eyed beachcombers to find...
And the picture? It's gorgeous Ngarunui beach in Whaingaroa Raglan where I live, but it's also where my little ship begins its journey. Not this beach, in particular, but any beach where the waves roll onto the sand, then retreat like beckoning fingers, leaving behind treasures for sharp-eyed beachcombers to find...
Tuesday, 15 April 2014
Catch up with two talented Waikato writers: Doug Wilson and Sharon Holt
Sorry I've been a bit quiet recently. It's because I'm blogging elsewhere, on the Between the Lines exhibition site.Between the Lines is an exhibition about Waikato Children's writers and illustrators (including me), and is on at Hamilton's Garden Place Library until the end of April 2014. We had a great opening earlier this month, with about 150 people attending. Now we're busy loading teaching resources onto the website, and blogging about the many fabulous exhibitors who are taking part.
This week I've interviewed Taupo author Doug Wilson, mastermind of the gripping Tom Hassler series, and Hamilton author and publisher, Sharon Holt, who recently scooped the Maori Language Award in the print category for her Te Reo Singalong series.

Check out their interviews on the Between the Lines blog.
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